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College Admission Essay
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College Admission Essay |
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College Admission Essay
Dear
I am writing to you in hopes you may be able to aid me in any way for college. This is my story:
When I was in sixth or seventh grade my mother was diagnosed with Bipolar disease and is also an alcoholic. She had tried to commit suicide on various occasions and was constantly in and out of the hospital. My mother was even sent away for four months at the Bradoboro Retreat Center. There were so many medical bills and my father was the only one working. Eventually we filed for bankruptcy. After struggling for a few years my parents decided to move because they might take our house. We lived up north so long it was going to be odd living in South Carolina but it was the cheapest place to live at that time. We claimed bankruptcy again and I no longer could see or graduate with the friends I grew up with. I was going into eleventh grade when we moved.
Three years have past and I still am devastated that I missed graduation and prom with my friends but our family is better off now. My parents are slowly building up their credit and getting back on their feet. When it came time for me to go to college I was out of luck. My parents make too much money for Pell Grants but don't have good enough credit for a loan. I graduated high school with a 4.0 but yet I have been trying to go to college for a year and haven't reached my goal. This year I was accepted to University of Massachusetts Lowell for this fall. I was also accepted into their music program that I auditioned for which is known worldwide for its excellent music classes. If there is anyway you could possibly aid me toward going to college this favor would never be forgotten and change my life forever. I've never asked for anything from anyone, mostly because I thought I could do it myself but I now know I need help. If there's anyway you can help me I would be so grateful and be in your debt forever.
Some things you might wish to know about me are listed in the paragraphs below:
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